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I Am Wolf

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 10:24 am
by Heart of Sword
I wrote this poem. Is there a poetry thread...? If there is, please don't delete this thread because I didn't save a copy of it (I'm not on my own computer).

If you read please leave a comment. Poetry is new to me and I'd like to know how it is.


I am Wolf
I am King of the wilderness
Filling the air with a song of sorrow
As I watch my homeland die
Beneath the mud-caked boot of Man

I am Wolf
I am a ghost on a mountain
Shrouded by myths and cloaked by legends
I was your dream
But you think me a nightmare

I am Wolf
I am courage and strength
I need love to survive
The support of a pack
Non-existant due to bloodlust and greed

I am Wolf
I am lonesome and tired
Why do you kick me when I'm down?
I close my eyes, the pain subsides
And I leave my body hanging on your wall, a gruesome trophy.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 11:13 am
by Stephen
Another poem moved to the correct board. Be sure to post your writings in one of these threads here on the writing board HoS.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 11:18 am
by Heart of Sword
Thanks, I didn't know poetry was supposed to go there.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 11:30 am
by SilverFang
I like it. mostly becouse its about wolves. :sweat: but its good every other way as well.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 12:31 pm
by Heart of Sword
Thank you! *glomp*

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 1:18 pm
by SilverFang
you are welcome :sweat:

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 1:28 pm
by CephasWhite
Beautiful...just beautiful...and deep...very deep!

Great poetry HoS! *glomps and kiss on your cheek* I love poetry!

PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 9:12 am
by Ratrace
I like it. Any more?

PostPosted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 5:08 am
by Catapult Turtle
I like how you described the wolves as they really are- kings who got kicked off the throne by us. And I mainly like it because it's about wolves... And I have a funny looking copper wolf that has a little flag that says "I am Wolf" coming out of it.

PostPosted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 11:03 am
by Kiba-kun
T.T

that's...SO BEAUTIFUL!!