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Rurouni Kenshin poem
PostPosted: Sun Oct 26, 2003 7:51 pm
by churchgirl111
this poem is Kenshin if he had recieved Christ...clearly shown in last stanza
Days past
Scar
everlasting reminder of days past
where the world was shrouded in blood
where it flowed down every street corner
every home
crimson red scar
a permanent mark
horror filled, without mercy
dawned a sword with ambition
exited a sword, dipped in red
hopes of peace
dubbed with destruction
Can there be reconciliation?
With this sword i pledge
Innocence shall no longer be the victim
by this scar i pledge
that no blood shall be spilt from my hands
It was already spilt enough on a cross
where one man bled enough to cover us all
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 5:44 pm
by Locke
that i must say is a buetiful poem about the wandering samories past
i must aplaud u child! jolly good job!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 6:59 pm
by churchgirl111
Domo Arigato
Appreciate it...keep an eye out for more...
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 8:13 pm
by Saint
That is nice... and i tell you Kenshin would have had a much better life if he did accept Christ. Samurai X: Reflections is just too sad... poor Kenny just couldn't do it on his own.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 03, 2003 8:09 am
by Azier the Swordsman
Yeah, I've always wondered what the show would be like if he had recieved Christ. No matter how many people he protects to make up for his past, on Jesus can truly wash away sins.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 03, 2003 9:16 pm
by Iapetus
*cries* That was awesome! Short but sweet... I always felt terrible for Kenshin and how he carried his guilt everywhere.
Never thought of writing fanfiction poetry about a character accepting Christ before. I've written fanfiction poetry, as well as a poem of my own conversion, but never thought to do both at once (well, not mine but theirs)...
-Iapetus
PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 11:47 am
by churchgirl111
Thanks everyone!!!
PostPosted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:01 pm
by Yeshua-Knight
hope ya don't mind, i'm gonna take your poem and put it on a good kenshin pic i have and post it in here
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 10:15 am
by girlninja
^^ /bow i'm flattered Yeshua ^^ oh just so ya know ^^ Churchgirl111=girlninja i had to change my sn for 2 reasons lol my comp crashed and i can't remember my previous password and no longer have access to it LOL so yea >< but really i'm flattered /bow domo ^^
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 10:22 am
by jazz
oh wow, that is so beautiful. thank you for sharing it!
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 10:05 pm
by Yeshua-Knight
here ya go folks, enjoy,
PostPosted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 1:16 pm
by jazz
wow, that looks so awesome! the writing and the picture go so well together. . . . such a beautiful poem... sigh.