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A Winter Romance

PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 8:51 pm
by Silvanis
This is only the beginning. Feel free to give constructive critisism... but please don't be to harsh. :sweat:

Winter’s icy breath whipped and wound its way through the trees of the small village in the northern part of Washington. Snow smothered the frozen ground with glittering lethality. Not even the bravest of creatures ventured out into the frigid air. No creature except Yoki.
Yoki was a tough girl of fifteen years. She walked stubbornly against the mocking winds, tossing her short, tangled, auburn hair defiantly, as if to say, “You can’t keep me inside.â€

PostPosted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 3:19 pm
by christianfriend
Kyaa! That was so good Silvy! I cant wait to read more!

PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 10:36 am
by Silvanis
Yay! Thanks! ^^

PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 9:38 pm
by christianfriend
Silvanis wrote:Yay! Thanks! ^^



<.< >.>.....Whats gonna happen next?..its killin me! @_@

PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 10:26 pm
by starstoryteller
Me living in Washington Issaquah this was delightful to think of snow. We only get it like once a year and it never gets so cold that milk frezzes. I love that.

PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 3:50 pm
by Silvanis
Coolness! :thumb: (lol, literally)

PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:17 pm
by Silvanis
Thanks much Anonymous! I shall work on that in my next installment... if I can find time to do that. XP