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Love Forever -poem- I enjoy comments

PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 10:17 pm
by Dead-Aim
Love Forever


It’ll be the flash back,
Don’t stop, shooting to get it.
Erroneous Errors, the fact of life
Wrecking ball, back to strife.
Ha ha! Lets us break it all,
Riding the dead camel.
Lets love forever, because love is free.

Windy laughing gas, this the attack.
Watch as we navigate, then gravitate.
We don’t stop, forever is freedom.
Lets all be a hero now.
Doctor, Doctor, what is wrong
With the world today.
“Just love forever, and we will be free”

Don’t stop, get it done,
This way life is born, universal
Complacency. If it could all be erased?
Then why do we hesitate?
All hate is gone with such a simple phrase.
Don’t be afraid. Say the words.
“I love you”

PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 1:30 pm
by Anna Mae
In the first line, you say "Erroneous Errors." Isn't that redundant? I'm also curious as to why you capitalized it.

Well, this certainly is an interesting poem. To me, it sounds like one of two things: either it is full of a lot of deep symbolism that I don't understand (I'd love an explanation), or it is randomness, which I do understand because that's how my mind works also.