CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

I wait in the afternoon's dusk
feeling the emptiness inside
staring at the heavens of magesty
can't even begin to cry

Knowing that a friend is near
already laid down his life
and here i sit in emptiness still
unwilling to take that step and dive

Here i am
Crying out to God
wishing i could be
held in his everlasting arms
covered with his astral wings

And yet i sit
unable to move
from this place of disease
Kill me God, take my sins
make me whole again
make me whole again
make me free

hm...that's deep...i like it...good job! A+! ^__^

wow that moved me alot! Do you mind if I print this?

*smile not at all just please put my name as the author ^_^

I wait in the afternoon's dusk
feeling the emptiness inside
staring at the heavens of magesty
can't even begin to cry

With a 'j', my friend, a 'j'. Majesty. Otherwise, it sounds like a parody on my name...

Rather enjoyable overall. Good depth, and that evil taunting half-rhythm. I'm beginning to like it.

wow, just wow i wish i could write like that but sadly all of my stuff is junk. -_-