weird question
PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 10:26 pm
Ok, I'm doing a story and such. My two favorite genres are Christian fiction and fantasy-type-stuff. So I decided to do a story that was both cause I don't think I've come across one thats like that.
Anyway... in my story there are characers who are 'abilitors'. They can use different abilities depending on what they specialize in. It wasn't till after I had organized all the different specialties out on paper that I noticed it could be taken as a form of magic... kind of.
My plan was to have it where in the story you could only get into higher rank with your abilities if God allowed you to. This envolved a lot of prayer and stuff. (and the badguys pray to the darkness who has to check it with god first) But I wasn't sure if that was a good idea now.
My question is: Do you think it would sound hypocit-ish if I made the story with this in it? Would is sound too much like magic to be mixed up in it?
-_- Thank you for reading this and if you reply, thank you for your opinion.
Anyway... in my story there are characers who are 'abilitors'. They can use different abilities depending on what they specialize in. It wasn't till after I had organized all the different specialties out on paper that I noticed it could be taken as a form of magic... kind of.
My plan was to have it where in the story you could only get into higher rank with your abilities if God allowed you to. This envolved a lot of prayer and stuff. (and the badguys pray to the darkness who has to check it with god first) But I wasn't sure if that was a good idea now.
My question is: Do you think it would sound hypocit-ish if I made the story with this in it? Would is sound too much like magic to be mixed up in it?
-_- Thank you for reading this and if you reply, thank you for your opinion.