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iono where the thought of this poem came from...it just came to me...hope yall like it. ^__^


My Beloved

You stare at me from afar.
You watch me like a lion watching it’s prey.
What is it that you’re thinking?
Are you plotting my demise?
Are you waiting for me to mess up?
What is it that you think of as you stare so intently at me?
The look in your eyes frightens me.
They look like dolls eyes
But yours move, so very quickly.
They watch my every move.
If I fall, will you take away all that I have?
What more could you take?
You’ve taken all I have already.
Do you want Him?
Do you want my Love?
You can’t have Him.
He is mine.
He is my beloved,
As I am His.
I will not give Him up.
He is mine.

<<ToT you pointed out my typos!!!>>

I liked the analogy you use in the second line of this poem, "You watch me like a lion watching its prey." The poem in general has a fairly unified feel, particularly with the emphasis in the first half of the poem on the eyes of the person watching the narrator.

Just as a quick question, is "my love" a human person or God? Some of the phrases seem out of place if the subject is, in fact, God ("You can't have him"); but capitalization of the third person pronoun, like in the second and third lines from the end, is usually only used when referring to God. I am slightly confused by this.

XD it's a typo...XD...;_; you pointed out one of my typos...(((((((((\ ToT)/ meany!

I apologize; I had thought that it was intentional. I generally do not point out typographical errors unless specifically asked to do so.