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poem

PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 3:57 am
by girlninja
Furnace

With its rapturous flames
in a unique melody
these flames of redepmtion
they wash over me

Flooding me
refining me as pure as silver
they purge the darkness from my body
its the altar call

Washing through me
Pierce my soul
oh redeeming nature of God
place me as a living sacrifice

PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 4:59 pm
by Magekind
First verse/stanza/was'sthing is just lovely.

Last one has a typo.

Can't believe this thing got this far down the list without a few comments.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 7:06 am
by girlninja
heh fixed the typo ^^ thanks for the compliment magekind ^_^ makes me happy

PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 7:30 pm
by Cedahlia
What a wonderful poem!! I love the second stanza. n.n Great job.