CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

if im gonna cry, i want you to hold me
if im gonna fall, i want you to push me
if im gona fly, i want you to soar

cant you be mine forever?

if im gonna die, i want you to keep living
if im gonna break, i want you to move on
if im gonna try, are you gonna help me

i dont want to come in second place.

if im gonna walk, i want your promise
if im gonna turn, i want your blessing
if im gonna talk, will you hold my tongue

cant we always stay together?

if im gonna bring, i want you to follow
if im gonna hold on, i want you to stay here
if im gonna sing, wont you listen

lets win this race.
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tell me what you think, comments or constructive critisimz, im all ears. i wast sure if this belonged in this forum or in jam session...o well.

Thats cool!^ ^d I could never wright a song. THats realy nice, please put up more!^ ^

thanks laura! okay, heres a new one, its not really about anyone in particular and it isnt finished yet.

this is the seventy'th song ive written about you,
how could you just leave me standing in the rain,
i waited for you for ten thousand years but you never came back,
i shouldve moved on but i couldnt abandon you now.

if ive fallen down this sky of broken dreams and words never said,
couldnt our memories live in our place in that familiar dream,
in that dream we built that shattered and withered like a weed,
what would you say if you found me now?

why didnt you call me,
why was i left here once again,
did you think i was going to wait forever for you to drop him,
but now youve left and im still standing here with withered roses.

if ive fallen down this sky of broken dreams and words never said,
couldnt our memeories live in our place in that familiar dream,
in that dream we built that shattered and withered like a weed,
what would you say if you found me now?

it doesnt surprise me,
it still feels like were unresolved,
why couldnt this just end and we could go on living,
dont turn around now that ive spoken 'cause deep down inside i know were meant to be.

You have a definite talent for this. Keep it up

thanks!

here is a new one.

i cant choose between this life and the one i see,
two roads i take and yet i cant breathe,
my veins are bursting, my heart is aching and i just died again.

im caught between allusion and fear,
your voice keeps ringing in my ear,
if i speak will my words be that of love or condemnation,
or am i going to live in chains of temtation,
i hate you i love you,
i just died again.

the choice is mine to walk down that path,
i cant deside and im enduring your wrath,
my veins are bursting my heart is aching and i just died again.

im caught between allusion and fear,
your voice keeps ringing in my ear,
if i speak will my words be that of love or condemnation,
or am i going to live in chains of temtation,
i hate you i love you,
i just died again.

i just died again, i just died again, im dying now,
i just died again, i just died again, im crying now,
who knows what could happen if you saw my face or heard my voice or watched my life or did i just die again? im caught between allusion and fear,
your voice keeps ringing in my ear,
if i speak will my words be that of love or condemnation,
or am i going to live in chains of temtation,
i hate you i love you,
i just died again.

Wow your so good!^ ^ I can't wright a song if my life depended on it! Your so good at it, keep it up!!!!^ ^

on my knees i hear your voice as your breath enters me
i am broken and i know you are searching in me
so ill stand and take hold this banner and this sword of truth
my voice was small but now ive grown and im trusting in you

and ill cry, for you
yes ill cry, for you
return to me my Lord
and sing once again
my heart was cold but now im hungry for you

ill surrender to you my soul and ill die to myself
i know that my life is yours and im part of your plan
so ill chase and i will run towards you
i will dance and i will follow where you lead me to

and ill cry, for you
yes ill cry, for you
return to me my lord
and sing once again
my heart was cold but now im hungry for you

i am running and im crying out your name
i will chase you till the end and i will listen for your voice
so im waiting and im fasting and meditating on you
i am searching for your answer and i am molded brand new

and ill cry, to you
yes ill shout, for you
and ill run, to you
and ill dance, in you
speak to me my lord
and renew my strength
my heart was cold but now im starving for you

Wow! Sonichiro your so good!!! X3 Keep it up!!!

thanks! ^__^