the passing of an old man
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 9:59 am
by olorc
i wrote this for a workshop. The theme I had to write about was self-fulfillment through community service. I really tried to make it an alagory but I think I was too suttle. A lot of thought and time went into this. I'ld like ot know what ya'll thought of it.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 2:37 pm
by true_noir_chloe
This is very well-written. I think you were a little too subtle, yes. I'm really not sure what to say. Did you feel very attached to the character's that you wrote about? I mean, this was an okay writing and you probably accomplished what you set out to do with it.
Overall, I was very glad to read something with very little errors. ^___^