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Here are somepoems I wrote, please say something good or badI'd like to know what you think!

My shadow behind me lies,
From it’s fiery mouth comes angry cries.
Its eyes are a blaze,
With a furious daze,
We’re at constant war,
Bad is the score.
Inferno like rage,
In my shadow cage.
Spreading irritation,
Across all the nations.
Eclipsing the sun,
Destroying all fun.
The phantom which follows,
Leaves me empty and hollow.
Anguished gloom.
Rage brings doom.
But I have hope.
In Jesus, my rope.

I'll post more of them later.

Fair, fair...

Why Fair fair?

that was awesome! i would have never thought of writing something like that. keep up the great work!

*smile good job ^_^ heh though i'm not into rhyme in a poetry *Mainly becuz i can't articulately rhyme and make the poem how i want it* lol but i like it ^^ keep it up ^^ look forward to more

Thanks guys!!!!
Here is another 1. This is my newest and only one that doesn't rhyme. Its diferent then all my others.

I know it could have been different,
you didn't have to act like that.
With all the things you say,
I have a right to just stay away.
I know God wants us to beforgiving,
And with our lives to keep on living.
Why did you,
Act like this?
What did I do?
Why did you say those things?
Why did you have to hurt me?
I wish things were different.
I wish you hadn't acted like that.
I wish you don't say what you say.
I wish I could just stay away.
But I won't stay away.
Cause I love you.
Even with the things you say and do.
But I won't stay away.
Cause you need me.
Thats what God would want me to do.

I know this is very different then any I have ever made but I wanted to try something new.

More to come if they are wanted.

Good job, Faithfighter! This last one reminds me of one of a few poems I've written.

^_^ i like faithfighter ^^ heh you gave me an idea to write a poem on that subject actually ^_^ forgive me for the idea stealing ^^

No prob steal away/