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Dragon Engine
PostPosted: Sun Feb 20, 2005 9:49 pm
by Fireproof
This will be a great story. It begins now. O.O
PostPosted: Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:03 pm
by bigsleepj
Sorry to nit-pick, but I can't open the file on my Word. Can you maybe save it as an RTF file so that it could work on more PCs.
Thank you.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:53 pm
by Photosoph
Same with me. Can't open it. Would like to read it, tho.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 21, 2005 8:05 am
by Fireproof
Alright. I converted it to RTF and zipped it up. Enjoy. ^^
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 11:39 am
by Kaori
That is better; I can actually open the attachment now.
It is a bit difficult to make any meaningful comments on such a small amount of material, so I will simply note that I found this beginning interesting enough that I will continue to read should you post any more of it.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 11:56 am
by Photosoph
Cool! I liked what you've written so far. Would be cool to see more.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 11:57 am
by bigsleepj
Pros:
• Its well written.
• Its interesting
Cons:
• Too short for its own good. Make it 20x longer.
I take it this is part of a larger story. If so I'm looking forward to it.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 3:55 pm
by Fireproof
bigsleepj wrote:Cons:
• Too short for its own good. Make it 20x longer.
I take it this is part of a larger story. If so I'm looking forward to it.
This is only the beginning. I want this to be at least 50 pages long in the end, probably more. Like 300 more. Hmm... Speaking of "more," I'll write some more tonight. Expect another page to a page and a half.