a poem i made for a school event
PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2005 8:49 pm
i wrote this poem a while ago but last week we had a poetry jam in school and i brought it in 
guess what!!! funny thing was that tho if it wasnt as short i wouldve won award!!!! 
i got kind of mad but now i look back and i see that it taught me patience well without further here it is!!!
[font=Garamond]black
i wished the world would care
to be just more aware
it seems to just stare
into the air
unfair
i wish that i had wings
i fly and look at things
id adorn the crowns of kings
but im grounded like a snake
and its starting to make me bake
its just more than i can take
my world just fades all into black[/font]so what do u think guys? i know its bad...but wrote long time ago so dont judge it too harsh!!!
