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"Last Day of Rejoicing" - 9/11

PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 7:05 am
by LostChild
ya i know toward the end it shifts really fast, but bear with me, k? that was at the begining of the "poem writing career," even though i can't be compared to such people as do way better than me... :sweat:


Last Day of Rejoicing

Joyous days,
Once to be had.
But now,
We can only mourn.

Fathers tell their sons,
“See you at Christmas.â€

PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 3:25 pm
by true_noir_chloe
This was a little difficult to read, but I think you handled it very well. Nice work. ^_____^

PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 7:19 pm
by LostChild
thanx, i ain't too shur how to re-word it... but i'm glad it wasn't as hard to read as i thought it would be. :sweat: