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a valentine's day poem...

PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 10:34 pm
by c.t.,girl
ok...i know it's not valentine's yet but...ok. lol

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I wanted to send you roses…
I wanted to send you chocolates…
I wanted to send you a letter with tons of pretty quotes…
I tried and I tried but I found none to suit how I feel…
I wanted it to be something original…
But everything that I thought was original…
Was stolen from my mind…
I wanted to send you pretty pictures…
But they too didn’t express how I wanted it to…
I wanted to write you pretty poems…
But I kept coming up with all the wrong words…
It’s as if nothing is good enough…
For every thing on this earth is less than you…
Is less than my love for you…
I love you.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 1:41 pm
by SereneDolphin
Every Valentine's Day, it's the same. What to get the person you love. It's a mystery that I'm still having trouble with. Never really was inspired by Valentine's Day, not exactly my favorite holiday. Very much different than your other poem, very loose on structure. I wasn't moved, but I've been reading way deep poetry lately, some real heavy stuff, and I'm kind of in that mode. Tis cute, though.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 3:20 pm
by true_noir_chloe
Very nice, c.t. ^_____^ Happy "early" Valentine's Day!

PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 3:39 pm
by Warrior 4 Jesus
Meh, don't celebrate Valintine's Day, but your poem is very good! Well done!

PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 7:05 pm
by Nightshade X
*reads*

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excellent ^_^d