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Sasuke poem-RK fan poem ^^ heh chicken of doom! ^^

PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 11:16 am
by girlninja
^^ hope ya like i had fun writing it at least ^^


The celestial heavens bear down
upon the one with the word "Bad" on his back
a word that is imbedded past the cloth that it's on
a word that bears the reputation of many bloodied hands
of slaughter
of death
of lasting peril
Is there redemption?

Bare knuckles
the Zanbato of the depths
lonely and afraid
wearing a mask to hide
wearing a mask to flee
from the ill fated word on his back

Of all the blood he has spilt, the bones he has shattered
he doesn't look up
of all the horror he faces
he can't feel the loving wings around him
he screams away the voices of God
his guiltied soul unwilling
unable
unyielding to the humble calls of the angels

Yet in his soul
in his heart of hearts
in the depths of the body
that wishes to flee
he seeks Him
he aches for Him
Lord, will he ever see?


^_^ BANANA!! :dance:

PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 3:20 pm
by Razgriz
It's very cool :thumb: I like the 4th stanza

PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 6:05 pm
by Esoteric
Nice poem. I'm not a RK fan, but isn't it Sanosuke? Sasuke made me think of Naruto.

PostPosted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 5:53 pm
by Kesshin
Nice one, girlninja-chan! ^^ It fits his personality and story nicely. Sanosuke's my favorite RK character, but you don't see a lot of poems about him. Mostly they're about Kenshin (not that there's anything wrong with that), but it's nice to see someone break out of the mold once in a while. :thumb: Keep it up.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2005 1:22 am
by girlninja
Esoteric wrote:Nice poem. I'm not a RK fan, but isn't it Sanosuke? Sasuke made me think of Naruto.



uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you didn't see that >.> <,< *ninja poofs to fix it real quick* *erase erase erase* *fix fix fix* realizes she can't change it nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

*adds a paper sign adding in the "no"

there no one will notice ^^

PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2005 5:29 pm
by Esoteric
girlninja wrote:uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you didn't see that >.> <,< *ninja poofs to fix it real quick* *erase erase erase* *fix fix fix* realizes she can't change it nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

*adds a paper sign adding in the "no"

there no one will notice ^^


Bwahahahahaha! Your ninja tricks won't work on me--I'm still wearing my ninja shirt/hood! I don't forget anything when I'm wearing this! *forgets the time while busy laughing* Eeeeep! I'm gonna be late for class! *runs out of the room in panic*

LOL