CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

Lost in the Days of the Past-a young samurai spirit

IN the days of an era of change
where the darkened streets
ravaged by blood and misery
now appear clean
the corrupt still rule

A samurai's spirit
stuck in a era that has no place
that has no honor
that chooses to forget the horror
and replace it with more
he waits

This samurai has been spared however
for now he does not have to pick up a sword
ravaged by blood, ravaged by death
but rather picks up a sword of life
swinging it's victorious blade
giving peace to cover the war
he contains the samurai's spirit
the warrior's hand
the human's heart

there ya go hope you like ^^

yeah...it's pretty good

Cool! I like it! Yahiko's not my fave RK character, but I like him. Write another poem some time! ^_^

well done, it suits him perfectly, if you decide to make it any longer you might want to mention something about him being more of a man as a child than his opposers would ever be

Yeshua-Knight wrote:well done, it suits him perfectly, if you decide to make it any longer you might want to mention something about him being more of a man as a child than his opposers would ever be

thanks for the suggestion i'll do that ^^

just let me know when you have a finished product if you decide to do that and i'll see about putting it on a good yahiko pic like it did with a rurouni kenshin poem