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Don't Call Out My Name

PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:38 pm
by Cedahlia
This is a poem I wrote for no real reason. It just kind of came to me...O.o; I don't think it's my best, but decided to post it here. ^^; Hope you like it.



Don't Call Out My Name


Too lost now.
Hallucinations of rainbows and silver
Are all I see.

Don't call out my name.
Don't call out my name.

Too far gone now.
Feelings of anger, joy and loneliness
Fill me to the point of running over.

Don't call out my name.
Don't call out my name.

Too free now
Taste of freedom is what I want most
No wish to go back.

Don't call out my name.
Don't call out my name.

Too reckless now
Falling with no bottom in sight
This is my only fate.

Don't call out my name.
Don't call out my name.

Too lost now.
Knowing I couldn't make it without you
Despair is consuming me.

You've called out my name.
You've called out my name.

PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 11:03 pm
by ShiroiHikari
hmmm, I like it. it flows like a song. :]

PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 1:19 pm
by AngelSakura
Reminds me of Call Me, Call Me from Cowboy Bebop. Probably because of the thing about <<Hallucinations of rainbows>> and the line in the song about "I close my eyes and I keep seeing things/Rainbow waterfalls/Sunny liquid dreams/".

PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 9:31 pm
by perelandra
I like... portrayal of a person fighting Grace out of ignorance but being rescued anyway whether he will or no, am i right?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 12:12 pm
by Cedahlia
Thank you very much. ^_^

Also, perelandra-san, I wasn't really thinking of that when I wrote it, but after I re-read it I thought that it kind of sounded like that as well. So it can have dual meanings. ^_^