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More Ante poetry! (Please comment!)

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 2:20 pm
by antefurem
Narcolepsy

I'm sorry, babe, the night loves me at day
Would you, in light, just come to understand?
In frozen cold - this sleep - what can I say
For words of explanation you demand?
I wish I'd said some words of heart and taste
Just before slipping into dark despair
But jealous night puts my few days to waste
And forbids me my love with you to repair
Forgive me, babe, if mem'ries seem too dim
The times I ought to know I simply can't
I've disappeared so many times - it's slim
That you'll not hear more than a sleeper's rant
Oh, baby, reach for me before you go -
In sleep, I love you more than you can know

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:00 pm
by Jaltus-bot
That's really good. I like it. :)

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:07 pm
by Mr. Rogers
good work. i like it. :thumb:

PostPosted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 6:38 pm
by Swordguy
interesting i like it