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I thought up this poem while i was thinking about searching for the truth. It doesnt rhyme at all, but a poem doesnt really need to rhyme. I hope you all like it.

I am the dark wanderer
I travel with nobody
Trying to discover the truth
Where ever i should travel

Is this a noble quest?
Searching, al;ways for answers
Nobody has ever suceeded
Will I be the first to find it?

People look for it in God
And search for it in science
Neither path seems to have worked
But both have got close to the truth

The truth should be self-evident
One single ultimate truth
I have traveled a lifetime
And yet, i still have not found it

The only place i have not looked
Is deep within myself
I will start my inner journey
Perhaps the truth is within.

I don't think you need any rhyming with this piece. I think it might've taken away from the piece if you had. I thought it flowed really well, and I really enjoyed reading it. I know I've felt like that before. Just had to realize that Jesus had the answers all along.

I could totally second everything Shadowblade has said here. Keep up the writing.