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Trigun Dream; or How I Met Nick-chan
PostPosted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 2:14 pm
by AngelSakura
[font=Verdana]I was blabbering on about this in the Tavern, so now you can read the whole story. Rated PG13 because I want a lot of leeway.
[/font]Trigun Dream; or How I Met Nick-chan
...Prologue...
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Tonight was no different. After spending some time reading and drawing, I turned off the light and prayed the same prayer I prayed every night. As I was closing the prayer, something struck me: What if I could live in the Trigun world? Heh, yeah, I thought, that would be nice...
[align=center][size=75] “Goodnight,â€
PostPosted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 3:06 pm
by true_noir_chloe
Good job on writing. You're 12? This is very, very well-written. ^___^
BTW, could you make your font bigger? It's really very hard to see. *squints* >_<
PostPosted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 3:17 pm
by Lunis
So cool! You're good at writing! ^_^
PostPosted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 4:38 pm
by AngelSakura
Oh, thank you. I really don't like the way the first part is written though, myself. It doesn't flow well to me.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 9:07 pm
by bakura_fan
I like it!!! I like it a lot! You're a very talented girl.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 9:44 pm
by Golden_Griff
Hey, what's this thread about? *reads post*
Hmm, I don't know much about journalism but this is nice. Very descriptive
So Angel, was this really a dream you had? Man...living in an anime...that'll be cool...
PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 10:15 am
by Nate
I like writing! Well, I used to. 'Till I lost my gift to do it. But I like reading what other people are writing!
That is very well written. I'd tip my hat to you, madam, but I haven't got a hat.
Hey, at least how you met Wolfwood seems to be really nice. Needless to say, when I met Hotaru-chan, it was a violent, bloody affair in the middle of a war. I might even tell ya about it, one day...
PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 12:40 pm
by AngelSakura
<<So Angel, was this really a dream you had?>>
No, actually I just called it that because I am that lame.
Thanks for the compliments! I'll try to get the next chapter typed as soon as possible.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:30 pm
by AngelSakura
Here you are! ^^ Just a little note: this version of the story is both my second draft and a little edited, because some of the original was quite personal.
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Chapter II
I heard the man coming back down the hallway, so I pulled the worn patchwork quilt around my shoulders to cover me up. I was wearing an old white T-shirt; now that I sat up I could see my old clothes behind the lampstand. They were covered in blood, presumably from my head wound.
The man knocked on the doorframe before pushing aside the curtain and bringing in a tray of food. Man, that smells good, I thought, licking my lips. He smiled.
[align=left]“Feeling better?â€
PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:35 pm
by Nate
Want...MORE!
PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:40 pm
by AngelSakura
*agast* I JUST posted that! Were you haunting this thread?
PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 5:07 pm
by Nate
AngelSakura wrote: *agast* I JUST posted that! Were you haunting this thread?
Err...no. It's just that as soon as I saw there was a new post in it I immediately went in and read it. I read pretty quickly.
And need more!
PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:03 pm
by Lunis
This is so awesome! I can't wait for more!