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lyrics to an unfinnished song

PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 1:33 am
by Shinja
Deep



Your anger is deep, you keep it locked away, with words you’d never say.
You try to laugh, you try to breathe, you try to be everything everyone else seems to be.
But deep down inside you know you cant hide from all the pain

You work hard to forget the nights, those dreams you knew all to well.
All your mistakes, all the lies you used to hide your self away.
You spend it all, to buy some time, time to be free.
But freedome comes from only one, one you cant seem to see.

And your only foolin yourself, actin like its all someone else. You walked the line
you done the time, and in your own mind you fell too far to be free.

Jesus save a poor retch like me, in this fallen world I cant see, in the darkness of my own sin,
I cant see where the light dosent shine in. deep deep in me

Deep I wonder why, I know the truth but I still lie, why I hurt the closest to me. Why I
sing your name but fail to do the same as you have tought me to be. Deep, deep in me

PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 2:59 pm
by Jaltus-bot
Wow. Will read again later. Keep writing.

PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 3:45 pm
by true_noir_chloe
Nice, I hope you finish your song. ^__^

PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 3:53 pm
by ally-san
well i like it so far. i can really feel the emotion put into this song

PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:02 pm
by Shinja
yeah, i wanted it to have a happy ending but, im not sure it will, also i have a problem with songs, i can write lyrics and i can write wordless songs, but i really stink at putting them togeather.