Deception

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Deception

Postby Zarn Ishtare » Sun Sep 03, 2006 7:37 pm

Deception




This is deception wrapped in illusion

This is the fatal understatement

Careful crafting of innocuous lies

This is a home for ruined thoughts



Don’t buy into it

The illusion fades with the passing of time

Don’t be deceived

It hunts through you.


Hands move beyond the veil

The shade of the prideful ones

Stand over puppet-pawns,

Children of an unholy creation



Don’t let the cloud of dark fall over thee

It brings false-action and wrong thinking

This coven, this foul concoction

The devils pride fall over thee


Do not! DO NOT! DO NOT BUY INTO THIS LIE OF PRIDE!


You shall dance upon the barrow-downs

Unmarked land your sepulcher

This is a farce and stony lie
A mountain of falsehood partnered with a heretics eye.



Don’t mark the book

Discover the shades of sobriquets

False names disguise an ill purpose

I mock the basis of your accusation

I am NOT YOUR VAGABOND


I AM NOT YOUR WHIPPING BOY

I WILL NOT DESTROY MY HEART

TO PLEASE YOU!


False mastery

You see no lies

Yet it dwells about you

Furies fly about your head

Soothing, soothing.

“You Are Righteous in thought and deed!â€
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby QtheQreater » Sun Sep 03, 2006 7:43 pm

*liked it muchly, but isn't sure what to say*
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Postby Tigerchu » Wed Sep 06, 2006 9:05 am

That line "And in God’s wounds I am made free.", I like that.
Have faith
-From somewhere in the Bible, and I agree with it

-God will only give you what you can take. He will not overwhelm you.
-From somewhere in the Bible

-Your faith becomes stronger when it's tested.
-I saw a Chinese guy with a cross on his restaurant desk in America. That's so cool. You can do that here. Not so much China.

I've recently been learning that I don't need to be "loud and pushy" to Evangelize; just living it out is enough witness. The problem was that I grew up around strong Evangelists (Korean Christians) and they were really into getting people involved and setting out to Evangelize, and me being a a yes-man (or yes woman) I was into trying to convert people.
I've been learning this lesson over the years, but have been trying to be pushy. Now I'm trying to ease off.
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Tue Sep 26, 2006 6:57 am

Deception




This is deception wrapped in illusion

This is the fatal understatement

Careful crafting of innocuous lies

This is a home for ruined thoughts [Well Hello complex symbology. No, but really, this is a rant, this whole poem is and no mistake. Once cast in the anger shades, I think you'll understand it better.]



Don’t buy into it

The illusion fades with the passing of time

Don’t be deceived

It hunts through you. [This poem is one of the most difficult to explain: I'm basically accusing them of being used of evil.]


Hands move beyond the veil

The shade of the prideful ones

Stand over puppet-pawns,

Children of an unholy creation [Here, I specifically call them out and consider them used of devils. It was a rather serious accusation at the time.]



Don’t let the cloud of dark fall over thee

It brings false-action and wrong thinking

This coven, this foul concoction

The devils pride fall over thee [A group dedicated to treachery; though it wasn't nearly as bad as it sounds, I went aflame when I found out.]


Do not! DO NOT! DO NOT BUY INTO THIS LIE OF PRIDE!


You shall dance upon the barrow-downs

Unmarked land your sepulcher

This is a farce and stony lie

A mountain of falsehood partnered with a heretics eye. [Remarking upon the Heretics fate, as well as...other things. Commenting on their self lies, you see.]



Don’t mark the book

Discover the shades of sobriquets

False names disguise an ill purpose

I mock the basis of your accusation

The book is their shared ideal, meaning don't mark your place, don't remember. The sobriquets and false names describe names taken for symbolic purposes, and their shadowy and hidden meanings.]

I am NOT YOUR VAGABOND

I AM NOT YOUR WHIPPING BOY

I WILL NOT DESTROY MY HEART

TO PLEASE YOU![I won't be matyred so you have a saint to pray to, meaning. It basically means I won't sacrifice myself so they can feel happy, I won't lay down and take it.]


False mastery

You see no lies

Yet it dwells about you

Furies fly about your head

Soothing, soothing.

“You Are Righteous in thought and deed!â€
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Anna Mae » Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:16 pm

Yet the voice of elder God did cry
“FALLACY! FALLACY!â€
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]

[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:

“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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