The Entertainer (short story)
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The Entertainer (short story)
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SwordSkill - Posts: 412
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SwordSkill - Posts: 412
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Note: I took down the story; I'm editing and submitting it someplace where it may have the chance of getting published in an anthology. Mods/Admins, please delete this entire topic. Thanks very much.
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SwordSkill - Posts: 412
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Congratulations! I hope it works out - you're an extremely talented writer. And, I hope you see this before the admin. gets rid of it. ^__^
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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Wow, thanks, true_noir_chloe. ^^;; Actually I decided to write an entirely new story for the antho...turns out the one I wrote isn't long enough and I didn't want to compromise it by trying to pad it up. Anyway, thanks again!
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