idea

[steelbeliever]

my friend and i are working on a one shot manga...no title...anyway, its about this irphen girl whose folks were in a car wreck and she is left alone...she goes back to her hosue before she goes to lvie with foster folks and finds a book in her folks' room...when she opens the book, it sucks her into this alternate world where she meets a fish man and a flying snake dude...they msut defeat the bad guy and save the day...probably seems lame but we haven't had time to work out the kinks...the characters ideas are pretty good so far, but we haven't worked on the story or gettign a christian theme much yet...criticize away...we really, really, really need it!