King of Phoenix: Part One

[Kaori]

Very amusing. I apologize for not being able to comment in more depth on this chapter; my time today is a bit limited, so I will simply not that I am still enjoying the story.

[Maledicte]

*ahem* Due to my lack of regular updates, I will no longer be posting my chapters on this thread. Also, I find it rather awkward to be posting unfinished, rough, subject-to-change material--is it just me, I dunno, but while I greatly appreciate the feedback, posting chapter 5 of an unfinished work that's already on chapter 13...it really gets me confused. Sorry for the lame excuses...if you are still interested in the story, please PM me and I will be more than happy to send you the later chapters. And sorry for the inconvenience. Thanks again for all the feedback and support.