some poetry

[ice122985]

Almighty God, help me stand
To be a Christian in this land.

Jesus, help me finish this race
I want to see your Lovely Face.

Precious Spirit, please move in Me
Just a Servant I want to be.

Holy Trinity, You are True
God, I owe it all to You.


So...what do you guys think?

[TheMelodyMaker]

Excellent. I can see how that would make a good chorus to a hymn. ^_^

[ice122985]

thanks, but i suck when it comes to music...but anyone else is welcome to try...

[Icarus]

What MelodyMaker said. By any chance, would we see the rest of the lyrics?

[HikariChan]

thats really neat ice!
its beter than what i can do.
i'm trying to do some^____^

[ice122985]

What MelodyMaker said. By any chance, would we see the rest of the lyrics?

uh...yeah, when i come up with some...but that'll take some time.

hikorichan- thanks.

[ice122985]

here's some more stuff that's connected with the first bit.

God, walk with me in this life
It's full of sin and strife
I need You Lord, yes I do.
I can't do nothing without you.

God, let Your love shine in me
Let Your power flow through my viens
So that Jesus is who they see
So that Jesus can heal thier pain

[ice122985]

here's something i came up with while working. it's a love poem...

The Beauty in You

I see the sun setting
I've seen the moon arise
But when I look at you
I see the beauty in your eyes.

I have heard many
Of the popular songs of choice
But when you whisper in my ear
I can hear the beauty in your voice.

I've smelled many roses
Far more than I care
For when you are near me
I can smell the beauty in your hair.

I have felt the richness
inherent in the land
But when you touch me
I can feel the beauty in your hand.

I've tried many foods
But none compare to this
For when you kiss me
I can taste the beauty of your lips.

All of these words
Can never say what is true
That I'm in love
With the beauty that is you.