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My art stuff
PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2004 9:56 pm
by Dark_angel
I think this one matches my name, but I'm not sure cause I just doodled this in a short time without thinking...^_^
and YES she is wearing something, just so you know.
PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2004 10:06 pm
by Ren_sama
WOW..thats really nice~!!!! O.O
oooo and you can do nice hands too~!!! o_o
and this is jus a doodle!? O__< *twitch* WwooowW...
PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2004 11:05 pm
by Dark_angel
[quote="anonymous"]...
... are you
sure she's wearing something? sure doesnt look like it.......
and since you're a special friend of mine irl, i'll actually critique it ^-^ *cracks knuckles*
the wing structure is bad. you should know that. unless the wings are totally broken at the base, they should not droop that low. also the feathers should be divided into sections with an appearance suitable to their functions and not just look like long fluffy things sticking off of the wing frame. the girl herself looks anorexic, but since anime and manga tend to do that to further extremes than you anyways, i'll overlook that. here eyebrows look a bit long and they seem to go off her face. also might be a tiny bit high, or is that caused by the fact that they are too long.. arms might actually be a tiny bit long(elbow does not reach that far down to the waist..) and the hair would be far to long for her to let it droop around her like that. it would get annoying. also i think the hairline would start lower than that]
How did I know it was going to be long? -_-
Oh yeah, you're the one who's critiquing it....
for the third time, she is wearing Something! You should be able to tell, I think..
PostPosted: Tue May 25, 2004 11:41 pm
by Ren_sama
LoL~
Well, either way,i still love it~ XD
PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2004 12:04 am
by Aka-chan
It really is nice! I'm not worried so much about it being realistic; the stylization is great, especially in how you use soft, flowing lines to form the picture. I guess I'm not as picky as anonymous, but I think it's great!
(anonymous, how come you don't critique mine so much?)
PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2004 3:04 am
by Elric_kun
thats really good!!^^ i really like the hair and wings^^
anonymous wrote:and since you're a special friend of mine irl
ooo, a friend of anonymous'!! hiya! XD lol
PostPosted: Wed May 26, 2004 9:34 pm
by Angelchick
nice drawing.
PostPosted: Fri May 28, 2004 7:31 pm
by JediSonic
Beautiful!
Anonymous, who ever said a drawing was incorrect because the subject doesnt mind having long hair?
PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2004 11:06 pm
by EireWolf
Beautiful drawing. I like how it flows.
I don't think it's meant to be realistic...
I like it.
PostPosted: Sun May 30, 2004 4:26 am
by The_Marauding_Maniac
Great job on it! ^.~
PostPosted: Mon May 31, 2004 11:28 pm
by Dark_angel
I will, I will! well, as soon as I can get it in the computer....
PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 2:20 am
by HikariChan
Thats very nice!!! i like the hair alot!
~BTW~ i love your Avatar