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Roll Film - A Web Comic

Postby bigsleepj » Tue Apr 20, 2004 12:39 pm

I've been writing/drawing a small web-comic over the last few months. Here it is; it's very silly and, unfortunately, not in an anime-manga style. But I guess no one's perfect. I would just like to know your oppinion, please.

To tell the truth, I'm not sure if this is the right place for this thread.

Beware; there is a blood on page 4 in the one corner. And beware of odd humour...especially like in the first page.

Thank you! :thumb: :hits_self :bang:

Roll Film
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Postby ThaKladd » Wed Apr 21, 2004 5:37 am

hehe :) very funny. I've read all the pages, but not al the long text parts(case I didn't have the time...) :-/ but you have good humour :grin:
We in our foolishness thought we were wise
He played the fool and He opened our eyes
We in our weakness believed we were strong
He became helpless to show we were wrong
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Postby JediSonic » Wed Apr 21, 2004 6:20 am

I like the ads. "You dont think we're running a charity here, do you?" :grin:
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Wed Apr 21, 2004 1:43 pm

I enjoyed reading this. ^_^ It has a very old flavor to it; but, that's not bad. When will you be adding more?

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby bigsleepj » Wed Apr 21, 2004 9:38 pm

[quote="true_noir_chloe"]I enjoyed reading this. ^_^ It has a very old flavor to it]

I usually ad on Tuesdays, but because it takes so long to colour in properly I'm thinking of doing the new pages in Black and White to save time.

What do you mean old? :eh: :lol: ;)
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The Sweet Smell of CAA
The Avatar Christian Ronin designed for me
An Avatar KhakiBlue gave to me
The avatar Termyt made for me

KhakiBlueSocks wrote:"I'm going to make you a prayer request you can't refuse..." Cue the violins. :lol:

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Postby bigsleepj » Wed Apr 21, 2004 9:40 pm

Thanks for all the replies...
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The Sweet Smell of CAA
The Avatar Christian Ronin designed for me
An Avatar KhakiBlue gave to me
The avatar Termyt made for me

KhakiBlueSocks wrote:"I'm going to make you a prayer request you can't refuse..." Cue the violins. :lol:

Current Avatar by SirThinks2much - thank you very much! :thumb::)
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